Halloween Monster Costumes

What do you think about this? Would you read this book if this was what it said on the back?
I'm about to write a book, but I want to know first if this would bring you in, make you want to read the book. This is what it will mostly be about. Here it goes. Katelyn and Justin, a newly wed couple, found their dream home, an old white farmhouse set on a large piece of land surrounded by iron gates. It looks like the perfect mix of beautiful and creepy, but the secret that the house holds is more frightening than the Turner's ever wanted, or could imagine. When they uncover a hidden chamber door under the bed in the master suite, it seems like the perfect opportunity to explore the charming house. They reveal the truth and start living a nightmare when they find six bodies, each dressed in Halloween monster costumes, and each holding the hand of another monster, their spouse. Horrified, Katelyn wonders, will they be next? It's going to be a horror/thriller. Probably teen/young adult. I'm thinking of calling it Monsters Under the Bed. What do you think? Is it too scary or gruesome? Please tell me your honest thoughts. I'm still not sure if I'm going to write it. What do you think of the names Katelyn and Justin Turner? They are probably going to be around twenty, very young. I'm just not sure that the names will fit such a young couple I picked Turner because it sounds like a rich-name. Justin's father is very rich. And they're 'around twenty' they'll probably twenty five or so.

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